Brooke mate, very good and well balanced documentary. You've clealry done your research and have convinced me to think twice about drinking. It's good to see that you've shown the views of under-age drinkers themselves, as well as former landlords and medical experts. The documentary has been well planned and executed. The sound could maybe improve as the voume varies from different scenes, for example I found it quite hard to hear the landlord's views. Excellent use of a wide variety of camera shots, clearly presented/narrated. Well done!
I like how you set out the documentary, you could understand what was going on and i think if was shown to other people would be quite effective. You can tell that you have researched so you know what to talk about and so it makes sense. I also like how you have used live footage from pubs to show under age drinking.
Thought it was very professional, and i like how you chose to do something different. Camera was always steady, and the transactions from clip to clip were very good.
I think its good how you chose to do a documentary instead of a music video. The material you used in the video was appropriate to what you were talking about, and featuring interviews with different types of people and their view and opinions made it interesting to watch. i think it was well narrated, and the shots featured in it were mostly held steady. The editing was good as well. well done!
I think that this video is really good its obviuos that alot of tine and planning has been used and it has come off really well the vedeo is really convincing as a documentary should be. The camera angles were varied.
Really good documentary, steady camera throught te video, looked proffessional the way that you were interviewing the people, and was good that you included the videos of underage drinking inbetween. Good video.
I thought this was a really good educational video it also had some humour incorporated into it. It was nice to see a different film rather than just a music video. There was good camera work throughout the film as well. Well done!
thought it was professional i also really liekd the fact that you interviewed diffferent people and that, possbily make it a bit more shocking liek the picture of the lad with his nose bitten off, this could make it really hard hitting and shocking, otherwise really like it and thought it was realistic and professional...
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ReplyDelete- set out like a documentary.
- professional.
professional, interesting and different from others. hypocritcal!
ReplyDeleteIt looks really professional. Good camera angles and variety of effects.
ReplyDeleteThe transactions from clip to clip were good. The voice overs worked well and were relevant to the film, it looked very professional.
ReplyDeleteI liked that it was different to what everyone had done, there was steady shots throughout and it looked professional.
ReplyDeleteBrooke mate, very good and well balanced documentary. You've clealry done your research and have convinced me to think twice about drinking. It's good to see that you've shown the views of under-age drinkers themselves, as well as former landlords and medical experts. The documentary has been well planned and executed. The sound could maybe improve as the voume varies from different scenes, for example I found it quite hard to hear the landlord's views. Excellent use of a wide variety of camera shots, clearly presented/narrated. Well done!
ReplyDeleteI like how you set out the documentary, you could understand what was going on and i think if was shown to other people would be quite effective. You can tell that you have researched so you know what to talk about and so it makes sense. I also like how you have used live footage from pubs to show under age drinking.
ReplyDeleteThought it was very professional, and i like how you chose to do something different. Camera was always steady, and the transactions from clip to clip were very good.
ReplyDeleteVery professionaly done. Steady camera shots and good angles and effects.
ReplyDeleteI think its good how you chose to do a documentary instead of a music video. The material you used in the video was appropriate to what you were talking about, and featuring interviews with different types of people and their view and opinions made it interesting to watch. i think it was well narrated, and the shots featured in it were mostly held steady. The editing was good as well. well done!
ReplyDeleteI think that this video is really good its obviuos that alot of tine and planning has been used and it has come off really well the vedeo is really convincing as a documentary should be. The camera angles were varied.
ReplyDeleteReally good documentary, steady camera throught te video, looked proffessional the way that you were interviewing the people, and was good that you included the videos of underage drinking inbetween. Good video.
ReplyDeleteI thought this was a really good educational video it also had some humour incorporated into it. It was nice to see a different film rather than just a music video. There was good camera work throughout the film as well. Well done!
ReplyDeleteHowever i do think that the video could have featured you at the end, summarising and concluding what you have found out from making the documentary.
ReplyDeletethought it was professional i also really liekd the fact that you interviewed diffferent people and that, possbily make it a bit more shocking liek the picture of the lad with his nose bitten off, this could make it really hard hitting and shocking, otherwise really like it and thought it was realistic and professional...
ReplyDeletei liked this video, was very professionaly set out; with 'arguments' from both sides of the story. was very interesting to watch
ReplyDeleteHave been told to add a critic comment so i think that there was a bit of camera shake in the pub scene towards the start of the documentary.
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